The Abundance and a Phone Call

blueSAPPHIRE

We had those times
It was ours
We controlled the time
We controlled the world
We controlled the universe
Nothing can stopped us

Slowly, but sure, bedlams came
Jumbling around my head
All the noise
It started to crack me open
Heating up from within me
'Til that one night
When everything burst out from me

I ended everything
I was controlled
I was baffled
I was ... reckless ...

I called you
And I started to end everything we had
I heard a shocked from you
I began to hear tears
You were crying
You were sad
You were torn to pieces
I still remember your sound
What was it like
What was the pain like
I was sorry ...
I am sorry ...
I ceased everything ... on a phone call

Days passed on
We never spoke
We never look in the eyes anymore
It hurt me
Knowing you were not mine anymore
And I started to talk with you
I was ... joyful
My heart started hammering in a jiff
Then I asked you back
To be once again in my arms
To be once again flourished by my love

You wanted me back
You still loved me
But you resisted
Rejected me on one ground
My dreams ...

I backed off
Knowing the fact

Again, we stopped talking
We stopped looking at each other
I hated you
I hate you
Everyday my hatred grows stronger
But along with it, my love grew stronger
Hidden by my hatred
It is now within me
Waiting to be flown out
Waiting to be given to someone else
I hope it is for you
But I just can't
This hatred prevented me
So, who should I give this love to ?

My sole regret will only be one
I ceased the time we once had ... on a phone call

---

by: maximus-alexandros
http://maximus-alexandros.deviantart.com


Inilah perasaan gue sekarang, ada begitu banyak cinta dalam diri gue yang gak tahu mau gue apain; kasi ke sapa.

Anyway, ini puisi. (jelas!) Bagaimana menurut kalian2 semua ??
Jangan terlalu kejam yahh.. kejam boleh, tapi jangan terlalu kejam.. :oops:
Maap kalo kepanjangan and pake bgs Inggris, it is my first language :oops:

Anonymous

Bagus .. ^^

jkevink

blueSAPPHIRE wrote:

We had those times
It was ours
We controlled the time
We controlled the world
We controlled the universe
Nothing can stopped us

Slowly, but sure, bedlams came
Jumbling around my head
All the noise
It started to crack me open
Heating up from within me
'Til that one night
When everything burst out from me

I ended everything
I was controlled
I was baffled
I was ... reckless ...

I called you
And I started to end everything we had
I heard a shocked from you
I began to hear tears
You were crying
You were sad
You were torn to pieces
I still remember your sound
What was it like
What was the pain like
I was sorry ...
I am sorry ...
I ceased everything ... on a phone call

Days passed on
We never spoke
We never look in the eyes anymore
It hurt me
Knowing you were not mine anymore
And I started to talk with you
I was ... joyful
My heart started hammering in a jiff
Then I asked you back
To be once again in my arms
To be once again flourished by my love

You wanted me back
You still loved me
But you resisted
Rejected me on one ground
My dreams ...

I backed off
Knowing the fact

Again, we stopped talking
We stopped looking at each other
I hated you
I hate you
Everyday my hatred grows stronger
But along with it, my love grew stronger
Hidden by my hatred
It is now within me
Waiting to be flown out
Waiting to be given to someone else
I hope it is for you
But I just can't
This hatred prevented me
So, who should I give this love to ?

My sole regret will only be one
I ceased the time we once had ... on a phone call

---

by: maximus-alexandros
http://maximus-alexandros.deviantart.com


Inilah perasaan gue sekarang, ada begitu banyak cinta dalam diri gue yang gak tahu mau gue apain; kasi ke sapa.

Anyway, ini puisi. (jelas!) Bagaimana menurut kalian2 semua ??
Jangan terlalu kejam yahh.. kejam boleh, tapi jangan terlalu kejam.. :oops:
Maap kalo kepanjangan and pake bgs Inggris, it is my first language :oops:

@TS

waw so complicated ya?

wah kebetulan aq suka bwat2 puisi2 wakaka

Trembling around the busy world,
Walking around in the circle of confusion
I am one too strong to fight.
Return to dark where shadows dwell.
Go away and leave my sight.
And take with you this endless night.

xD

bwat ngusir wakakaka

blueSAPPHIRE

@albert2
thanks !! ^^

@jkevink
complicated yah ??
hahahaha, masaq sih ??
gue suka bgn ini nih--> "Walking around in the circle of confusion"

jkevink

ow yta?

wakakaka

ntar pusink low klo jln2 muter2 wekkeek

lah

iku kan pusii a lanjutin

byar bsa membuang mantan lo jauh2 wekekekek

cckckck

u still ceased time on phone ..

blueSAPPHIRE

jkevink wrote:

ow yta?

wakakaka

ntar pusink low klo jln2 muter2 wekkeek

lah

iku kan pusii a lanjutin

byar bsa membuang mantan lo jauh2 wekekekek

cckckck

u still ceased time on phone ..

idih, mantan gue jgn dibuang jaoh2 kali..
masih ada cintanya tuh, walau jg ada benci
hahaha..

lah, sekarang aja uda pusink
masaq jaln muter2 bakal bikin gue pusink ??
gak lepel deh !!
kaga ngepek

oo, untuk lanjutan toh
hahaha, gue kira puisi lu sendiri
abis, agak gak nyambung ama bait terakhir dari puisi gue sih XD

jkevink

low2

itu emg puisi baru wakaka

bwat buang2 your BF

Hey Hey U U I dun like ur BF wakakak

giripeni

time never back

kurogami

sik..sik..
tak bacane sik..

kurogami

0whhhh..

blueSAPPHIRE

jkevink wrote:

low2

itu emg puisi baru wakaka

bwat buang2 your BF

Hey Hey U U I dun like ur BF wakakak

OOO !!!!
hahahahaha
*jadi merasa bego.. -.-*
tapi.. jgn dibuang donk~~

blueSAPPHIRE

giripeni wrote:

time never back

yaahhh
begitulah..
hahaha
makanya lebih baik untuk dikenang saja:)
(sempet bingung ma maxd giripeni)

forgetMeForgetMeNot

dah cari lagi... laki masih banyak.. apalagi sih kalo gay buat puisi paling juga putus cinta.. LOL

blueSAPPHIRE

kurogami wrote:

sik..sik..
tak bacane sik..

kurogami wrote:

Owhhhh..

sik, sik ??
mxdnya ?? sick sakit ?
terus tiba2 ngomong 'owhh'
.... ?? ....

blueSAPPHIRE

forgetMeForgetMeNot wrote:

dah cari lagi... laki masih banyak.. apalagi sih kalo gay buat puisi paling juga putus cinta.. LOL

hehehee..
tapi ini sebenernya bukan puisi buat bf/mantan bf
melainkan mantan gf

tapi gue masih demen koq ama kalian2~

jkevink

forgetMeForgetMeNot wrote:

dah cari lagi... laki masih banyak.. apalagi sih kalo gay buat puisi paling juga putus cinta.. LOL

mangkanny drpd bwat puisi bwat mantra kek aq

bwat usir mantan wekekeke