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TEXT 1

PADANG BULAN

Andrea Hirata is well-known writer a novel with title “Rainbow TROOPS”
-Andrea Hirata is a well known novel writer, he wrote "Rainbow TROOPS".

In 2010 he has publish a novel with title “ Padang Bulan”.
-In 2010, he has published a novel, which was titled "Padang Bulan".

Although in Rainbow Troops he narrates about his life when he was a child
Padang Bulan is a story about his love to A ling, although his father not blessing
-Although in "Rainbow TROOPS" he narrated his childhood life, he wrote about his love -which was not blessed by his father- to a person named A Ling in "Padang Bulan".

The story about his love story but also about his friend,
-Other than his love story, "Padang Bulan" also tells one of his friends' life.

Enong and M. Nur Enong is a poor orphan woman who must work
become a tin prospector for her family
-Enong (M. Nur Enong) is a poor orphan woman who has to work as a tin prospector to aid her family.

She loves English lesson and have determined for study it
-She loves English lesson and she had been determined to study it.

Until one day she meets ikal and M.Nur
-Until one day she met Ikal and M.Nur.

when she want to study English in English course live in Tanjong Pandan.
-When she went to study English on an English Course, she moved to Tanjong Pandan.

However, ikal and M. nur want to supplying a job in Jakarta but ikal think about A Ling
-Ikal and M.Nur wanted to supply a job in Jakarta, however Ikal was still thinking about A Ling.

He guess want to marriage with zinar
- He thought She wanted to marry Zinar.

Finally, he choose work in his uncle’s coffee shop become a waiter.
_Finally, he chose to work as a waiter in his uncle's coffee shop.

M. Nur doesn’t go to Jakarta because miss his mother
-M. Nur didn't go to Jakarta because she missed her mother.

and want help ikal grabbing A Ling from Zinar by chess match
-And she wanted to help Ikal getting back together with A Ling by winning a chess match from Zinar.

The story so fool but it have a deep meaning
-The story's full of humor, but it actually has a deep meaning.

The story consist of meaning about love, friendship and life
-The story mainly contains intrinsic meaning of love, friendship and life.

Although ikal doesn’t have bless from his father about his love to A Ling
At least, he can get A Ling and his father love
-Even though Ikal didn't get the blessing from his father for his love, he still could get A Ling.

Strong determined make us become a great people that is why I choose this novel to read
-Strong will make people greater, this value is the reason why I chose to read this novel.

Although, Rainbow Troops is a well-known novel than Padang Bulan
I rather choose Padang Bulan than Rainbow Troops to read because the story is fun for read
-Even though "Rainbow Troops" is more well-known than "Padang Bulan", I'd rather choose Padang Bulan over Rainbow Troops because the story is more amusing.

TEXT 2

“Tanah Surga.. Katanya”

The Movie from direct Herein Novato and production By PT Demigisela Citra Cinema.
-A movie from director Herein Novato and produced by PT Demigisela Citra Cinema.

Many people Indonesia country on contine go abroad and work in Malaysia.
-A large number of Indonesian people are continuing becoming commuter to Malaysia.

Some people Indonesia who work or even move and become citizen there.
-Some Indonesian even changed their nationality after they worked there.

Genre movie is drama satire director by Dedy Mizwar and Brajamusti.
-The movie genre is Satire Drama, directed by Dedy Mizwar and Brajamusti.

Satire is means quibble of condition of the people
-Satire means "Quibble of people's condition".

First story with arrival haris (Ence Bagus) from serawak Malaysia, he is single parent have 2 children
-The first story is about Haris' (Ence Bagus) arrival from serawak Malaysia, he's a single parent with 2 children.

There are salman (osa Aji Santoso) and Salina (Tissa Biani Azzahra)
-The children are Salman (Osa Aji Santoso) and Salina (Tissa Biani Azzahra).

During time Haris work on serawak and he is rarely back home
-Back then while Haris worked on serawak, He rarely came home.

Two children with her father is name hasymim (fuad Idris) and her often sick
-There are two children with a father named Hasymim (Fuad Idris), and he get sick frequently.

Hasyim is excrucades dwikora compaign battle oppose Malaysia
Hasyim is an excrucades dwikora campaign battle oppose.

Haris invite her father go abroad Malaysia because condition is not bad with health facility and easy search jobs
Haris invited her father to came to Malaysia because his health can be treated with Malaysia's Health Facilities, and the simplicity of searching job in there.

But hasym refuse because he reason Indonesia is heaven land and rich to
However, Hasym refused because he thinks Indonesia is a Rich Land of Heaven.

Haris only invite salina
-Haris only invited Salina.

Haris have wife
-Haris has a wife.

Malaysia people
-a Malaysian.

The condition on contine very different with Malaysia,
-The condition of Indonesia & Malaysia infrastructure was really different.

For example electric available, street , and minimum education facility
-For example, the electric availability, the street, and minimum educational facility.

On contine, the teacher one only she is Astuti (Astuti Nurdin) her teach double classes 3 and 4
-They only had one teacher named Astuti (Astuti Nurdin). She teaches 2 classes, class 3 and 4.

And agus ringgo as dr anwar
-And Agus Ringgo played as dr. Anwar.

He is doctor from city
-He is a doctor from the city.

And had assignment on contine Kalimantan with Malaysia.
-And he had an assignment on Kalimantan and Malaysia contine(?).

From the movie we can see actor so well in appear character.
-We can see the actors played their characters really well from this movie.

Shortage from the movie, no appear students from class 1,2,5 and 6
-The weakness from this movie is there's not even a single student from grade 1, 2, 5, and 6.

Director less exploration of natural beautiful and condition on village,
-The director didn't explore the beautiful village's nature to the fullest.

Also not creative , the plot not climax
-It's also lack of creativity, and the plot have no climax.

Surplus the film from the theme is good and have nationalism soul
-This Film's Strength is it's good theme and nationalism soul.

The movie also is satire form for central govement
-This movie is also a manifestation of a satire to the central government.

TEXT 3

JOKOWI

Jokowi is Indonesian drama film in 2013
-Jokowi is a 2013 Indonesian Drama Film.

The film played by Justin Rifnu wikana and Prisia Nasution
-The film's played by Justin Rifnu Wikana and Prisia Nasution.

The film was released the day, Thursday, June 21, 2013
-It release date is Thursday, June 21st, 2013.

to greet the birthday of DKI Jakarta Joko widodo 52nd day on Friday, June 21, 2013
-As a celebration of Joko Widodo's 52nd birthday on (Friday or Thursday?) June 21st, 2013.

Sry ya ga diberesin. Inggris saya sendiri ga terlalu bagus, hahaha. IMO, ini ga cuma grammar yang berantakan, ampir semuanya berantakan sampe cerita aslinya ga nyambung. Kalo emg buat survey, segini jg kayanya cukup, since ke belakang jg sama2 aja tipe-nya. Semoga membantu ya (?)

balam_jloo

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il_gamyeon

@mumura waduh, sry nih, gw msh discreet, ga bs ngasih data valid.
Datanya palsuin aj, ga bakal ada yg tau, hahaha. Sry ya.

balam_jloo

Owhh.. Bener nehh gpp?? Yang penting aku udah minta ijin minta nama yah mas @il_gamyeon

il_gamyeon

@mumura silakan2, haha.

balam_jloo

Aslinya mana to masnya?? @il_gamyeon

il_gamyeon

@mumura haha, ga dari mana2.

balam_jloo

Hahemm.. -_-

balam_jloo

Tapi aku yakin masnya itu ngerti banget masalah grammar.. Org jarang salahnya.. -_- @il_gemyeon