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Love in the First Meet (Full English Dialogue)

edited July 2012 in BoyzStories
This is My First Short Story with Full English Dialogue.

I really hope for Criticism and Suggestions u guys, because it's my Priority to Advance.

*note : if anyone not understand, please translate it yourself!

So, Enjoy my Short Story guys!

"One day, when i was in Central Park, i saw someone i liked and fit in my Criteria. I'm trying to sweeten him with my way, i.e. with my seduction absolutely! lol... check it out!..."
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  • me : excuse me...
    him : ya, what's up?
    me : do u know what time is it?
    him : it's 10 o'clock
    me : are u sure?
    him : yeah, i'm really sure, why?
    me : nothing, but why the time stops whenever i look at u...
    him : ... (speechless)
    me : can i have your name?
    him : sure, my name's George
    me : ohh really?...
    him : yes, why?
    me : because Angels do have a same name
    him : ... (speechless)
    me : i'm Mark, may i ask to u?
    him : eh, of course... what is it?

    ....
  • ....

    me : do u know how many people on earth?
    him : are u kidding me, dude? absolutely nope...
    me : there are about 5 billion people on earth, but to me there's only 2.... u and me
    him : god damn it, u make me shy dude...
    me : really?
    him : yeah...
    me : ehm, i see... would u be my OWL dude?
    him : what?
    me : Only Who Lovely in my Life...
    him : wow, to the point? i like it and u make it fast.. but Ok, maybe i'll try.

    *got it*

    ....
  • ....

    me : what's your name? sorry, i forget!
    him : George!!! (mad)
    me : can i just call u 'mine'?
    him : ... (speechless)
    me : huf... since i met u, i dont want to have any dreams
    him : why dude?
    me : because i finally realize the reality of meeting u is way better than having a dream..
    him : shit! u make me cry, now..
    me : .. are u ok, baby?
    him : ya, i'm ok! i just really glad to meet someone like u..
    me : oh baby... come to me *hug*
    him : ..... dude, may i ask to u?

    ....
  • ....

    me : of course, what is it?
    him : what is more important to u, me or your life?
    me : absolutely, my Life
    him : ... (sad)
    me : because 'U' are my Life!!!
    him : ... *big smile*

    *hug*

    me : baby, u must be a good runner
    him : really?
    me : yes, because u are always running in my mind
    him : ~eh
    me : and u must be a good thief
    him : eh, why?
    me : because u have stolen my heart
    him : damn,
    me : but i'm always a bad shooter!
    him : whyy?
    me : because i 'miss' u always~
    him : ohh~

    ....
  • ....

    *kissing*

    me : baby, if a big fat man creeps into your bedroom one night and stuffs u into a bag, then dont worry!!
    him : why???
    me : because i told 'Santa', i wanted u for 'Christmas'!
    him : so sweet... Love u dude~
    me : Love u too~

    *kissing*

    him : why do u love me?
    me : i love u not because of who u are...
    him : so?
    me : but, because of who i am when i am with u~
    him : ohh dude, u make me fly, now...
    me : *big smile*
    him : *big smile*

    ....
  • ini sih bukan cerita tapi rayuan gombal pake bahasa inggris #lol
    lanjut~~~
  • ....

    me : i'm invisible
    him : are u kidding me, again? no, u are not! lol
    me : so, u can see me?
    him : yeaaah dude!
    me : how about tomorrow night?
    him : oh i see... lol, OK! (have a dating)
    me : 10 PM..
    him : OK!
    me : baby, u are like a violin!
    him : what's again?
    me : because the music stops now and then. but the strings remain forever~
    him : ohh man...
    me : bye now! Love u...
    him : bye! Love u too...

    "To be continued..."
  • Hahahahahahah......Lucu =)) =)) =))
  • ini sih bukan cerita tapi rayuan gombal pake bahasa inggris #lol
    lanjut~~~

    @xchoco_monster iya sis, gw mau buat cerita beda dari yang lainny, lol
    sorry kalau pake english, soalny lebih gampang aja ngarangny, lol
  • eh,
    aduh, kiraiin cerita, rupanya rayuan2 gt, hahhihihi
    but, aku suka!
    Masih ada kelanjutannya kah? Kalau ada, post skrg juga!
  • not a story but this is a satire lol
  • kok berasa andre ovj pindah ke central park yak...
  • Gombalan bule wkwkwk....
  • when i read this, one thing popped up in my mind... I wonder if any couple of human in this earth join together after event like above happened. hahahahahahaha... seems silly but, yeah.. I can't hate this "gombalan"... keep going TS..!^^
  • kaget, aku kira cerita, taunya sedikit mirip sama satire juga sih, tapi aku suka, lagi dong gombalannya haha
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